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War, Peace and Vengeance stall (OoC)

Nyoko

Vindictive Nekomata
I should've probably created this right after the IC...

Welcome to the OoC of WP&V, where general talk about the story is appreciated and where I'll put out general news regarding the IC. Feel free to speculate, post fanart about my fanwork if you so desire, post critiques, et cetera et cetera. Basically, anything even slightly related to the story goes.

I'll also get this more involved later, but I feel like I should get the setting correctly introduced before I'll start diverging from typical storytelling methods. What I have in store for you all who can wait, I won't say. But know this: playing the long game requires both patience and consistency in equal quantities.

Well, enjoy your stay here and hopefully make it flourish every once in a while.

 
Woo! Can't wait to see what comes next. :) Did you shave down the factions? I had a lot of them in the original RPG idea, mostly to give the player characters a lot of potential leads and make the world feel more expansive. But having so many factions might be a weight on the story. Some didn't really have any impact on the setting either. I don't think either the Hermits or the Netherworld are even referenced outside a faction outline.

 
Woo! Can't wait to see what comes next. :) Did you shave down the factions? I had a lot of them in the original RPG idea, mostly to give the player characters a lot of potential leads and make the world feel more expansive. But having so many factions might be a weight on the story. Some didn't really have any impact on the setting either. I don't think either the Hermits or the Netherworld are even referenced outside a faction outline.
Short answer: there'll be a spotlight so I don't have to think about every interaction that happens in between the Nations of Gensokyo at all times, but they all exist to a certain extent.

Long answer: For this first 'arc' it'll mostly be the Scarlet Empire and the Underworld taking the spotlight, as they are the most important and the ones with the most lore to utilize (as well as the ones who would have a decently unbiased and complete education). But I have plans for almost all of the factions to make them important sometime in the future (except for the Garden of the Sun, they've been willingly vassalized.) but I'll let you in on the starting line of thought for the two you seem to want me to discard for my own sanity.

For the Hermits (which I assume to be Senkai): That Mausoleum has to have appeared or will appear somewhere due to the waning magic, the question is how long can those hermits last before they realize they have to exist in the physical realm? Also, where will they appear?

For the Netherworld: The Yama have lost new hell and most heavens as well as 冥途 (Meido) [which functioned as a court]. They're going to want those facilities back.

All in all, just one realm outlined in the RPG has been slightly changed and even then they might become important down the line, likely diplomatically. But let us first get back to the country Mina is a citizen of so she does not have to go back to the Sanguine Warband and risk her life again.

 
And look who is here too? Yup, I'm paying you a visit after our last talk! And I must say Fairy WARBANDS? Did I read it right? We are having a Gensokyan turf war in a post-apocalyptic setting? I mean if Gensokyo is about magic and magic is fading then it's like the apocalypse yes? Haha, and I was playing Fallout last week. Let's talk about our girl, Mina katt the Cat, sounds like something you would do (going by your profile), she seems like our usual reliable cat (as far as cats can be) and hardened maybe? I'm already worrying for her, since Rose almost killed her in the first chapter I assume people here shouldn't be trusted and that's why I choose to follow from afar, amusingly this is the second time I had to be the tiebreaker today.

 
And look who is here too? Yup, I'm paying you a visit after our last talk! And I must say Fairy WARBANDS? Did I read it right? We are having a Gensokyan turf war in a post-apocalyptic setting? I mean if Gensokyo is about magic and magic is fading then it's like the apocalypse yes? Haha, and I was playing Fallout last week. Let's talk about our girl, Mina katt the Cat, sounds like something you would do (going by your profile), she seems like our usual reliable cat (as far as cats can be) and hardened maybe? I'm already worrying for her, since Rose almost killed her in the first chapter I assume people here shouldn't be trusted and that's why I choose to follow from afar, amusingly this is the second time I had to be the tiebreaker today.
Welcome back, I see that you've taken my advice regarding signatures.

You got the part about the apocalypse right on, but I must tell you it is a crazed Fairy warband, the actual Fairy state exists and likely won't be important for Mina Katt 'till she deals with other, more pertinent stuff. As for her personality, what else do you think someone who can stare directly into the abyss of one of the darkest desires humanity can have and understand it would have? At least Satori have to see what the person on the other end is currently thinking; this poor Nekomata would have to see how she has been impaled and getting cooked alive, while understanding where it came from... Which is not guaranteed to be proportionate to getting boiled alive.

 
I'm back! It seems that now the cat is out of the bag... didn't expect to fumble stealth this early but getting a taste of fighting should be beneficial for us in the long run, normally i wouldn't use my trump in the first mob that appears but since Kymoh already voted for it and my own curiosity asks for it then let's be a bit bold for now. Also while the "Queen Remilia" thing sounds very in character i'm still having my doubts about what you call "Fairy State", how are they even managing themselves? A very hardened Dai is probably the president or something, maybe a prime minister? while Cirno acts as the "face" of the state. Not only that but i'm pretty sure i read about some sort of Hakurei military in the earlier chapters too, Reimu even bothering to build an army? Oof, sounds almost unreal.

 
This is about the length I want each post to be, I was just uncertain if I could garner both interest and retention to give it my all. A feeling I want to avoid at all costs is spending hours of my life labouring for nobody to appreciate my work when it is finished. Also, my writing style when writing my own thoughts is very different yet also the exact same from my writing style when I am telling a story, as I should probably spend more words on details than I am currently doing, but now is not the time nor the place to complain about my perceived shortcomings.

For practical information that will interest all of you, the updates shall be moved to this day of the week. Both to give me time to take @Motaromc's vote into account and because it is a Wednesday so that when studies eventually start again it won't hamper the schedule.

I'm back! It seems that now the cat is out of the bag... didn't expect to fumble stealth this early but getting a taste of fighting should be beneficial for us in the long run, normally i wouldn't use my trump in the first mob that appears but since Kymoh already voted for it and my own curiosity asks for it then let's be a bit bold for now. Also while the "Queen Remilia" thing sounds very in character i'm still having my doubts about what you call "Fairy State", how are they even managing themselves? A very hardened Dai is probably the president or something, maybe a prime minister? while Cirno acts as the "face" of the state. Not only that but i'm pretty sure i read about some sort of Hakurei military in the earlier chapters too, Reimu even bothering to build an army? Oof, sounds almost unreal.
I'm not going to let you wait 'till like, Arc 5 to figure out how the Fairy State functions. Geopolitically it is just Belgium being stuck between No Man's Land, The Scarlet Empire and The Hakurei Republic. Leaving that aside, they function on a weird mixture of Scarlet Feudalism and Hakurei Republicanism.

In more detail, every Fairy can declare a Queendom in any territory as long as they can rally people to defend it as a nation and succeed. If they have existed for half a year, they then get to send a representative to the Royal Confederation, where they vote on things like supranational defence, trade with other nations, (de)centralization, ...

If Reimu bothered to build an army then there would not be an army. Someone else gets things done while she acts as the face of the nation (for the most part). Though I feel like we'll get to meet a Hakurei person soon enough for me to keep my cards mostly concealed concerning them.

Lastly, here (and here) is a link to the topics I took the setting and character from, with very distant plans to get people to use the centre again. I can't force people to, but I can prod around to see who wants to do what when, along with their consistency in doing so... Though I'll notify you when I will test what.

 
For practical information that will interest all of you, the updates shall be moved to this day of the week. Both to give me time to take @Motaromc's vote into account and because it is a Wednesday so that when studies eventually start again it won't hamper the schedule.
You know it's kinda funny to read this because i just told Yumetou that my weekly visits are insufficient to properly participate in the quests, in truth, i was thinking about setting a day in the week to peek at any possible writen content and consequently voting since it's not that much troublesome, however i can't promise a review since those take some time, i really try to put some effort here you know? took almost an hour to write the big one in Yumetou's Ooc thread but anyways, wednesday should be fine for me to appear here and interact a bit. Also before i say something about the story i feel like i must warn you that i'm always willing to read as long as you are willing to write and that you should't feel indebted to me at all, if you want to take a break or feel like this is taking away too much from your time then i'll understand completely.

Now, for the actual fun part, a question! Is it possible to bad end my cat from using her skill? I couldn't help but notice how edgy the "Abyss" part seems, and it probably can get quite messed up with some people, this random mob here for example just showed us some casual TORTURE, lol. Ah, before my half-asleep brain forgets it, I also read about "Otherworldly Ventures" somewhere else, this made me feel a bit curious, and that's why i chose to question about them.

Lastly, here (and here) is a link to the topics I took the setting and character from, with very distant plans to get people to use the centre again. I can't force people to, but I can prod around to see who wants to do what when, along with their consistency in doing so... Though I'll notify you when I will test what.
Cool, I think this will answer some lingering questions that I might have, I'll read it... as soon as I can because right now I'm working at 5% of my power. Oh no, my mind is already shutting down! must... click... submit... 

 
You know it's kinda funny to read this because i just told Yumetou that my weekly visits are insufficient to properly participate in the quests, in truth, i was thinking about setting a day in the week to peek at any possible writen content and consequently voting since it's not that much troublesome, however i can't promise a review since those take some time, i really try to put some effort here you know? took almost an hour to write the big one in Yumetou's Ooc thread but anyways, wednesday should be fine for me to appear here and interact a bit. Also before i say something about the story i feel like i must warn you that i'm always willing to read as long as you are willing to write and that you should't feel indebted to me at all, if you want to take a break or feel like this is taking away too much from your time then i'll understand completely.

Now, for the actual fun part, a question! Is it possible to bad end my cat from using her skill? I couldn't help but notice how edgy the "Abyss" part seems, and it probably can get quite messed up with some people, this random mob here for example just showed us some casual TORTURE, lol. Ah, before my half-asleep brain forgets it, I also read about "Otherworldly Ventures" somewhere else, this made me feel a bit curious, and that's why i chose to question about them.

Cool, I think this will answer some lingering questions that I might have, I'll read it... as soon as I can because right now I'm working at 5% of my power. Oh no, my mind is already shutting down! must... click... submit... 
And I enjoy those reviews, despite the fact that sometimes I feel like I'm a bit too talkative... So continue taking your time and don't feel indebted to me either.

As for your question, no, at most you'll just mentally scar her away from her ability 'till the next time she gets a type of therapy, but it is not possible to bad end the twintailed cat. it's just that Nelly here lacked forgiveness to temper her vengeance even a little, thus creating the scene I described.

 
And I enjoy those reviews, despite the fact that sometimes I feel like I'm a bit too talkative... So continue taking your time and don't feel indebted to me either.
It's good to see we're on the same page! I was here on Wednesday as promised, but I didn't leave you a review, even though I read and voted for your story, as much as it makes me sad, the reviews will have to wait until Sunday. However, I'm here now and I have been itching to say, WOAH, CEO Oscar? Otherworldly Ventures does sound like something that would come straight from him but... (I really want to swear here but I'm not sure if it's allowed... still) Dang! It seems that the world is ending in not only one quest but TWO! All my plans of carefully nurturing Oscar, and taking care not to rush anything to minimize the risks are now completely obsolete (mostly because I just discovered that we're on a timer), I read the other two threads you have linked to me and I believe that I understand the situation now, first things first, I'll have to throw away caution and start Balling. Oh, It's probably irrelevant but my sleep-deprived mind completely missed how my autocorrector changed "Mine Kat" into "My cat" in my last review lol, i'm glad to see that I can abuse her powers with minor consequences hehe.

As for the story, it's amazing to see how much leeway we have in the underworld, i thought Mina Katus was a forgettable mob character in the background but color me surprised! Satori trusts us enough to mediate an Oni conflict... We should take care to not be bent in a particularly unpleasant way, even with reduced magic they are still Onis after all. However, I feel like you may have some questions about how I choose to talk with our poor dear applicant before anything else, and my answer is... TRIAL BY FIRE. Let me tell you a quick story, one day, a young Mota suddenly found himself a job inside a small school, it was his very first job with disgustingly low pay despite Mota's complete inexperience with teaching, considering he never thought of becoming a teacher before, he was still excited for his first day! 31st of October, Halloween, everyone was so busy in that stupid understaffed school that they shoved the clueless new guy into a classroom with 43 students, some even older than I was at the time, for 5 hours and a half without any guidance or warning beforehand and if that was not enough, I still had to leave to the closest supermarket around to buy food and decorations for the school, not to mention that I had to arrange the decorations myself in the end. Moral of the story? I want to see this guy suffer like I did, Satori says he is eccentric. I don't care as long as he can hold the fort for us. If he doesn't ask to leave by the end of our duties, then I believe he will make a fine minion for Mina.

 
Hello again! So, I know I said that I wanted to bully this guy and everything but some words (mainly "abundant lust") in the last chapter forced me to stop and actually analyze the situation in our hands, you see, it pains me to admit that I failed this weeb skill check and didn't understand what a "sinsack" is. After a quick Google search I was able to determine that a sinsack should be the Touhou version of a "Mogeko", the little lewd Pikachu species from that questionable game, i know that he... what was his name again? John Kurogiri? I know that John seems to be a pariah in the eyes of his people by having what Mina claims to be a moral compass. Still, he was already demoted to Mogeko in my mind and the bullying was intended to be only a rite of passage for a new comrade after all. However, we won't just disregard this guy yet! Maybe he can evolve like a Pokemon in the future, we just need to throw him into some random battles and feed him rare candies.

As for my choice, I feel like asking advice from bigger cat is the best call for now, we are dealing with Oni soon, maybe Orin could lend us a hand or help Mina deal with some stress from her totally safe last adventure. 

 
Really? Biggus Cattus has been in even more trouble than Mina now? I guess I should have expected that I was hoping for fresh advice and headpats but Orin only gave us the *Teehee* and now we have even more pressure on our shoulders. Still, we have some useful info nonetheless, the first one is that the discussion was about enslav... I mean hiring the evil spirits to farm crops or not and that they are somehow inconclusive about using them to make an army, hmm, how do I say this? My personal opinion about this mess is why not? If we can get minions then I believe we should get minions unless they prove themselves detrimental in the long run, the sinsack experiment might prove to be essential to get actual proof to be presented in the courtroom.

Talking about courtrooms, DOREMY-CHAAAN, a small cameo in the very end? what a pleasant surprise or perhaps not, what is going on here? Someone powerful asking for help in exchange for favors? I can only think of Satori but would that really be necessary? I have my doubts about this but as the saying goes, one does not look a gift horse in the mouth, i can't shake the feeling though that Doremy seemed a bit off, as if in a hurry, and Mina's comments that she is "holding off her base desires" give me even more reason to think, how did the decay of magic affect the dream world? Is it the same or maybe dreams are not reaching the dream world as they did before? Worst case scenario, our lovely Baku might have been starving for a while, which isn't good, because I really like her character, you know?

With that said then I suppose I can send my weekly review and wait for Yume to update the tale of Magic Man Ozzy... Wait, am I forgetting something? Oh right, the courtroom! Sorry, Doremy got me distracted, her Santa hat is a bit cute. No, I must focus! The courtroom, I chose it because nothing else seemed related to our predicament right now! I can say that the bloody scenario is probably about Mina's backstory about how her owner got killed or something and that seems like a terrible idea to focus on right now considering that she already has a lot on her shoulders! Although I'm interested to know more about this in the future, the other two dreams completely confused me because I have no idea what their meaning might be. All in all, the courtroom dream probably holds the key to our future choice, and that pink bubblegum cloud she has looks very fluffy, I wonder if she could let me rest my head on it, maybe she would even caress my head and look at me with that smug face of hers while I slowly drift away to a peaceful rest.

 
I blame the Baku! Hello, I'm a whole day late to reviewing this time but please don't curse me senpai, like I told Yume just now, I've been a bit sick since yesterday and was having a bit of trouble with a mighty headache that prevented me from writing, I swear I'm not evading you in purpose! on the bright side, I have a whole Monday to take it easy now which rarely happens nowadays. Seriously now, I'm blaming this cursed Baku! I was swayed by the sweet promise of a peaceful rest and failed to understand what the dreams were supposed to mean, imagine my surprise when I saw Eiki talking to us and about a war no less. I don't think we are paid enough for this, does Mina even get paid at all? I have a feeling that it's just a minor allowance plus headpats and praises which may or may not be enough...

So, like any good underling should do, it's time to warn our boss and promptly step away from this mess, i have a feeling though that this will end up being our problem in one way or another by the end of the day. Next, we should get this experiment done with and deal with the Oni already, then take a look at what Okuu is doing lately, the option to talk to her has appeared quite a few times, and considering the way things are escalating lately, the nuclear furnace might be on the verge of blowing up.

*Reminder to self* Never mistake a parliament with a courtroom again or else we might end up becoming an unwilling ambassador.

 
Yay, another update filled with red flags and possible hints! But what can I even do about it? First of all, our MP went down ever so slightly and that makes me curious, what will happen if it reaches 0? Will Mina be out of commission because of it? Cease to exist because she is a being of fluffiness, magic, mystery and vengeance? Or just be tired and unable to use her skills? Anyway, I hoped that she would recover a bit with rest but maybe the dream got in the way of our MP regen, and being locked out of our magical option is still a bad thing so I'll be keeping an eye out for that from now on. Another thing that bothered me was Satori's reaction or the lack of it, perhaps she had been expecting something like this for a while now, another thing is that she was already expecting some sort of progress but didn't seem to be in any hurry about it, maybe it was I who was being overly nervous about everything but in my defense, it takes weeks of careful planning in our end but to Mina, it has been barely a day of headache.

Another hint that you almost shoved in my face is that Okuu can also help with the spirits dilemma and that's a funny thing to know because I had completely discarded Okuu in favor of rushing the parliament into order as soon as possible, as I could see just now is that maybe we should analyze everything thoroughly before taking this step and considering that we might be nearing into a conflict then strengthening our military will be essential, I already know what I'm voting for next unless, of course, you decide to surprise me with something else. Now, to talk about our choices, I gave a lot of thought to this one and I simply decided to trust Kymoh on this one, normally I would just use the sinsack rather than go over the trouble of finding someone else, he seems to be the most trustworthy and expendable person we have right now so if we want to gather decisive data then he is our guy but my ally voted first and I doubt anyone else will try voting (I even held back my vote until today to not influence anyone), so I decided to make it easier to you and follow his lead.

Wait, that begs the question: What would you do if I voted for something else? Like using the sinsack considering he is right in front of us instead of having to search for someone else? Would you flip a coin? Roll a dice? Write a mix of both options? act as the tiebreaker and choose something yourself?

Edit: I learned how to edit! So here I was, staring at nothing, waiting for the tale of magik magical guy to update and I just realized that who are we even asking to help regarding the experiments? No, the right question is, who will be a willing test subject and also one that probably won't lie or get mad at us? Mina doesn't strike me as a person with many friends and it takes a real one to do this. So I changed my mind! Do the coin flip Nyoko! I'm calling HEADS.

PS: Ey, i guess we won't have Ozzy today, not surprised because Yume is probably still waiting for that copy of Forbidden Scrollery...

 
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There won't be a chapter or however you want to call it today at the very least (probably next week, if I had to set a date), because I caught a cold when I would usually begin with writing and my body only knows one way to deal with sickness: Nuclear Warfare. (Also because this chapter is going to explain something very important* that I absolutely cannot afford to improperly explain.) Oh, and the fact that I was busy teaching a friend economics 101, being social, et cetera, didn't help either.

Though regarding the tiebreakers; if it is something I can combine I will try my best to do that (unless I can provide the same amount of info with the other way), but if it is incompatible like this one, then the vote that is the highest on the order I gave them to you wins out. But not without Mina acknowledging the thought and arguing for and against both choices internally. In this case, we're bothering the Sinsack and will likely be seen as a monster for reasons that I will explain later because my head wants to explode now.

Don't be discouraged from making a tie, because then I have to give you all a compelling reason for why Mina herself would choose to do that choice rather than the other one, which may give you more information than not having a tie in the first place.

*That being an explanation of Mina's ability.

P.S.

Do the coin flip Nyoko! I'm calling HEADS.
Just for you I decided to flip a coin: it's heads.

 
Nyoko! How nice it feels to talk with someone once in a while, it's so sadge you are feeling unwell to the point of Nuclear Warfare, I hope you remembered to stock enough food and water in your bunker. So, first of all, I was reading my last review here, the one I tried editing, and it feels so weird, it's like I was supposed to write an addition in that little box where I explained the reason for editing my message or maybe I'm just overthinking and my especially edited review™ is actually fine... what? Oh right, I'm supposed to talk with you and not with myself, sorry it's a force of habit, then about your cold, I hope you get well soon and don't worry about the goofy old me, I can survive just fine without my weekly dose of Mina Kat's hellish adventure.

There won't be a chapter or however you want to call it today at the very least (probably next week, if I had to set a date), because I caught a cold when I would usually begin with writing and my body only knows one way to deal with sickness: Nuclear Warfare. (Also because this chapter is going to explain something very important* that I absolutely cannot afford to improperly explain.) Oh, and the fact that I was busy teaching a friend economics 101, being social, et cetera, didn't help either.
That's a nice way of making me think about my decisions and choices when you point it out like this, "however I want to call it", did I turn it into a story in my mind? I remember that this is a project for the revival of Kaguya's roleplaying thread if I'm not mistaken, are you just roleplaying and letting me think that I'm actually reading a story composed of "arcs", "chapters" and everything else? To think your manipulation of me would go to this extent, you are truly evil boss! As compensation, I would like some classes of this "Economics 101", it sounds like a powerful school of magic, wait, actually don't do it please, it's probably very boring as well. As a side note, I think I did catch a cold one or two weeks ago, maybe I even talked about it in one of my reviews *scrolls up*, *reads*, *scrolls down*, I did! I even broke my schedule too and reviewed it on a Monday, see? we are more alike than it seems, considering that we both can catch colds, which is certainly rare and almost unheard of, it might be a weird theory but I think we are in fact long lost siblings or perhaps even twins. I am the evil twin though! Can't let you have the best role.

Though regarding the tiebreakers; if it is something I can combine I will try my best to do that (unless I can provide the same amount of info with the other way), but if it is incompatible like this one, then the vote that is the highest on the order I gave them to you wins out. But not without Mina acknowledging the thought and arguing for and against both choices internally. In this case, we're bothering the Sinsack and will likely be seen as a monster for reasons that I will explain later because my head wants to explode now.
Okay, serious mode now, this is not a bad take for the tiebreakers dilemma, having Mina's input for each choice is actually a good move because I can get you talking and giving me more info to work with, despite being only things Mina herself would know it's already better than whatever I could imagine because I'm more of a third party here if anything. Now, to finally address the elephant in the room, how did the bother minion option turn out so badly? It's actually mind-blowing to know that our choices actually have consequences (who would have thought?), looking on the bright side, at least we are getting our info.

Don't be discouraged from making a tie, because then I have to give you all a compelling reason for why Mina herself would choose to do that choice rather than the other one, which may give you more information than not having a tie in the first place.
About this, it's not about making a tie, it's that I wanted to play the ally role I forced gave to Kymoh <- (My ally), as you can see, I'm not always the most reliable guy around considering I completely disregarded the fact that choices have consequences (who would have thought?), however, my most reliable ally did not. It's a shame I let my inner thoughts win (they are going to win again if I ever face another similar situation) but it won't happen again so rest assured.

P.S.

Are we doing P.S.s now? I'm not against it, I always wanted to write P.S.s ever since I was a kid, I'll be using this one to explain why I choose Heads instead of Tails. Sorry for making you go through the work of flipping a coin with a headache by the way, anyways, i watched Hellsing Abridged before writing the past review and there is one scene where Integra asks the Major what he did to Alucard and he eloquently responds: I called Heads.

P.S.S.

Looking back now, it kind of makes me cringe, is there any scientific phenomenon that describes the act of cringing whenever you see the work of your past self? My weekly reviews are always influenced by whatever I did at that specific time, mostly as a way to make writing this as funny as possible for me and for whoever reads this in the future, so I hope I didn't talk too much this time.

P.S.S.S.

The theme for next chapter is probably:

Am i a bad person? 

Quote by Lolicard​


 
I'm back with a vengeance~.

As a quick explanation of where I disappeared off to, I got lost in the realm of my own imagination, the rabbit hole that is attempting to categorize vengeance, a school that is a lot heavier on the homework, and a small purchase of the entire Reincarnated as a Sword saga. Getting into a rhythm with all of those things was (and still is) difficult, but I'll manage. The rhythm is tantalizingly close, so it'll be fairly easy to begin incorporating the things I sacrificed to do emergency work back into it.

That is not to say I have been standing idly by, it just has not been a lot of Touhou.

Now then, you may have read that we're about to depart to Arc 2, of which I have some ideas floating around of what I want to do, but with the person who wants to learn how to write being here, I wonder if what I am about to do would even fly with him...

Eh, screw it, what could go wrong?

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With permission from both the captain of the Military and Queen Satori herself, I, Mina Katt, hereby query any valiant soul with a body to join our expedition to the Hakurei Republic. The Republic is currently at war with the Netherworld, so expect battle and unceremonious death.

I expect people proficient in combat against spirits and capable of surviving on their own in the wild. We’re going to be fighting the Netherworld as a contingent on the side of the Hakurei, so we better leave a good impression on them.

Lastly, know that there are merely six places to be filled, so the earlier you sign up, the better your chances at getting in. We leave within a week of first posting this announcement on the – of --------------, Season 142.

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There is your prompt for your character creation. You may even attempt to write how the interview is going to go, and I'll certainly take as much of how you would write it into consideration when it is time to actually depart for the Hakurei Republic. You may also write as many as you want, though six is the maximum that are going to come with her and I shall take a character from a new person over another from the same.

Just remember: I am incapable of forcing you to write, nor do I want to.

 
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NYOKOOOOOOO!!! I missed you! (I totally didn't forget everything I was planning for this particular quest), so many things happened while you were out, can you believe that a fair amount of friends gather here around this time to participate in the quest voting process? You should consider dropping around more even if it's just to vote and leave... Anyway, I'm glad to see you alive and kicking since the last time I heard about you, you mentioned something about nuclear winter and sickness, I got a little worried you know?

Welp, I should probably address the elephant in the room now, if I actually kept my earlier promise of visiting every Wednesday I would have seen it earlier which might have allowed me some time to think, all things considered, I guess you asked me for a character so I can help you build a little RPG party and do some "funny" around the Hakurei Republic right? Hmm, six characters are a bit too much but maybe I can cook something out for you real quick, I'm quite mediocre at writing though, or else I would have tried a big introduction just for you.

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With permission from both the captain of the Military and Queen Satori herself, I, Mina Katt, hereby query any valiant soul with a body to join our expedition to the Hakurei Republic. The Republic is currently at war with the Netherworld, so expect battle and unceremonious death.

I expect people proficient in combat against spirits and capable of surviving on their own in the wild. We’re going to be fighting the Netherworld as a contingent on the side of the Hakurei, so we better leave a good impression on them.

Lastly, know that there are merely six places to be filled, so the earlier you sign up, the better your chances at getting in. We leave within a week of first posting this announcement on the – of --------------, Season 142.

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Hehehe, look at this, I feel honored even! I mean, you are being so polite by formally inviting me out of all people, in truth, you should try selling your idea around to see if you can find more people who might be interested, I'm sure my ally would find it at least interesting and you probably have seen Soshmal earlier right? Sosh in particular appears to be very competent if their comment about getting Yume's story in a Google Doc just to take notes is anything to go by. Ops, sidetracked myself a bit, back to character creation... Hmm, knowing myself I would go with the weirdest Youkai I can get my hands on, give it a strange quirk, and make a special mechanic to trigger said quirk here and there but I'm not nearly as knowledgeable about Youkai as Yumetou proved to be, all I know are some from the original source, perhaps it's time to do a quick research? Google, Top 10 weirdest Youkai native to Old Hell.

Alright, maybe I got a bit too enthusiastic, spent some time looking around, and found some really weird folk, the giant hairy feet got me laughing a bit but the filth-licker thing had me a bit disgusted, there is one that is surprisingly funny though, have you heard about the little pillow flipper? The little guy who goes into your house while you are sleeping and flips your pillow (That's literally all it does), sounds stupid enough to make a character whose biggest goal is to flip every pillow in Gensokyo, right up in my alley! Sadly, this little one doesn't really fit the theme for Old Hell which is just sad because I took a liking to its simplicity, all the pillow talk feels more attached to the dream world than anything, there is also the fact that if you supposedly flip a pillow of a sleeping person then that person gets closer to death so the little fella might not be as dumb as he might appear...

All in all, it got a little late and I've yet to see if I have any story to vote on tonight. Do tell me if my rambling actually helped with something, see you around friend.

 
Well, it turns out I have been a bit too tight in my scheduling again... So I'll just spin this into a way to make everyone else have a chance to contribute at a more relaxed pace. I'll create a character every week and process the suggestions when I find out about them.

Also, I'm quite lax when it comes to the restrictions, finding something that could work in the context presented is already hard enough, that you don't necessarily have a completed character, but rather a concept of one is natural. There are a few key answers to important questions that need to be answered, though.

First: Does it feel like he/she is wrongfully persecuted? 
-> If yes, they pass this question.
-> If no, did they live in Former Hell originally?
    -> If yes, they pass.
    -> If no, they don't.

Second: Would they even somewhat agree with the core ideal of the country? (That being: "Through Understanding Comes Peace!")
->If yes, they pass.
->If no, they don't.

You can ask a few other questions, but those two are cardinal rules I follow when I characterize people from the Underworld. It's possible for there to be an exception to those rules, but good luck finding it.

(I totally didn't forget everything I was planning for this particular quest)
I have no clue what my subconscious has planned for me either, I just know it has something coherent planned. This is also not the best first chapter/prologue I have ever written, but it's there now, as a testament to my struggles to become a 'good' writer. whatever that illusionary title may hold.

NYOKOOOOOOO!!! I missed you! (I totally didn't forget everything I was planning for this particular quest), so many things happened while you were out, can you believe that a fair amount of friends gather here around this time to participate in the quest voting process? You should consider dropping around more even if it's just to vote and leave... Anyway, I'm glad to see you alive and kicking since the last time I heard about you, you mentioned something about nuclear winter and sickness, I got a little worried you know?
The Troubles have indeed kept me away longer than I'm willing to admit, though for now it hasn't been so bad as to require hospitalization. I also bought quite a few things not related to Touhou that interested me, which also kept me away, but Gensokyo is a place that feels familiar to me. It is a place to rest the weary bones of a traveler of the internet, though too much rest hurts the same as too little rest.

I also get way too carried away making plans and working side jobs that I don't rest as much as I probably should, and I refuse to complain about my situation because it can always get worse. My whims also haven't taken me to Gensokyo in a while, so that's also a reason.

Welp, I should probably address the elephant in the room now, if I actually kept my earlier promise of visiting every Wednesday I would have seen it earlier which might have allowed me some time to think, all things considered, I guess you asked me for a character so I can help you build a little RPG party and do some "funny" around the Hakurei Republic right? Hmm, six characters are a bit too much but maybe I can cook something out for you real quick, I'm quite mediocre at writing though, or else I would have tried a big introduction just for you.
Considering I disappeared of the face of the earth for a while, I completely understand why you didn't come here every Wednesday just to confirm that I am in fact still gone. I was more so gauging the interest and the trust of the people who care to come here and read my ramblings than I actually wanted one person to create six characters. Also, it is extremely difficult to be mediocre at something. To write well enough it doesn't have any notable mistakes while writing bad enough to not leave a lasting impact on the people that read your work. Also, you don't have to contend with city poets.

Hehehe, look at this, I feel honored even! I mean, you are being so polite by formally inviting me out of all people, in truth, you should try selling your idea around to see if you can find more people who might be interested, I'm sure my ally would find it at least interesting and you probably have seen Soshmal earlier right? Sosh in particular appears to be very competent if their comment about getting Yume's story in a Google Doc just to take notes is anything to go by. Ops, sidetracked myself a bit, back to character creation... Hmm, knowing myself I would go with the weirdest Youkai I can get my hands on, give it a strange quirk, and make a special mechanic to trigger said quirk here and there but I'm not nearly as knowledgeable about Youkai as Yumetou proved to be, all I know are some from the original source, perhaps it's time to do a quick research? Google, Top 10 weirdest Youkai native to Old Hell.
Well, I don't want to make a habit out of advertising my story in another story's forum, but if you want to contact those people privately I won't mind. In case you haven't noticed it yet, I bury as much meaning into everything I can, which leads to some strange circumstances when people don't pick up on certain key meanings and I misdirect them because I want to practice manipulation. Though I somehow retain a certain air that makes them keep their guard low around me. 

That mystery is hard to keep when you're the one initiating the conversation, so I avoid doing that as much as possible or provide answers that bring more questions. So you can consider this a source of inspiration to make my writing a little more complicated; I like a challenge, after all.

Yumetou once said that I was someone with a great understanding of Youkai. I respectfully disagree, as I only know two, maybe three Youkai deeply and about half a respectable amount, with most of my information coming from trusted sources or applying common storytelling tropes to Youkai to make the illusion that the net I have is as wide as it is deep. I also do a lot of research if I think I am lacking something necessary for the misdirection, which then somehow turns into a great understanding of Youkai for someone who can barely recall what a Gotoku Neko is. (That being a forgetful cat that came into this world by having their tail singed at the fireplace [at least, that's the most likely explanation].) So I can't say I would know much more than you.

Alright, maybe I got a bit too enthusiastic, spent some time looking around, and found some really weird folk, the giant hairy feet got me laughing a bit but the filth-licker thing had me a bit disgusted, there is one that is surprisingly funny though, have you heard about the little pillow flipper? The little guy who goes into your house while you are sleeping and flips your pillow (That's literally all it does), sounds stupid enough to make a character whose biggest goal is to flip every pillow in Gensokyo, right up in my alley! Sadly, this little one doesn't really fit the theme for Old Hell which is just sad because I took a liking to its simplicity, all the pillow talk feels more attached to the dream world than anything, there is also the fact that if you supposedly flip a pillow of a sleeping person then that person gets closer to death so the little fella might not be as dumb as he might appear...
I had not, but I did hear of the Youkai that sits on you so hard you suffocate, the Kanashibari, which the pillow-flipper is related to. Also, there is opportunity there for a Former Hell Makuragaeshi.

Straight from Yokai.com
 

Others still have attributed this spirit to the actions of monster cats such as kasha.
Does that remind you of someone? If it does not directly fit the theme of Old Hell, figure out if it is related to someone who is. While you're there, go read up on the kanashibari, as well. It does not have to be a 1-1 transcription of the Youkai as stated, as Goutokuji Mike will remind you with her mere existence.

Considering you got another try due to me overestimating my abilities, go try again.  :MeilingThumbsUp:

I should also put up a timer when I start writing these things because where the hell did the last hour go?

 
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